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endless fight.

Spinning endless circles dear
Upon this point of purity.
Arm's out stretched to eternity
Caressed by dreams of unity.

Shrouded in the mists of time
The urgency with which we pine.
In beds of roses, entwined with vines,
For long lost souls, we've left behind.








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inspired by bleeds no more by ~tuzluktakihayalet
http://tuzluktakihayalet.deviantart.com/art/bleeds-no-more-91193278
&
"Pyramid rose"
artist:Me

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  • Beautiful! I adore this side of both pictures...

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  • rbruce gold member
    July 10

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    A compelling poem, very much so. There is nothing more I can say. Two lines stand out for me:-
    The urgency with which we pine
    and:-For long lost souls, we've left behind.
    Life goes on and we leave a lot behind when we move.