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Vintage

Missing image

Chianti paramours,

fermented passion panaceas,

spilled during interlude toasts,

hemorrhaging vinegar.

 

Sheets changed,

Claret hues

linger in eyes,

vintage despoils taste

for discerning

between heart champagne

and lust's tainted label.

Author notes

30 words
Picture prompt:

bleeds no more by ~tuzluktakihayalet
http://tuzluktakihayalet.deviantart.com/art/bleeds-no-more-91193278

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  • marlene47 silver member
    July 11

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    Private Stock Vintage

    Enjoyed the extended wine metaphor - chianti, fermented, toasts, vinegar, claret, vintage, champagne label... passionate love once spilled lingers in vision, blurring labels of heart and lust. Light red color, earthy flavor and jam tastes.
    Marlene

  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    July 10

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    Outstanding...I really enjoyed your take on the picture....

    Thank you for entering and good luck!

  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 10

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    Vintage wines interspaced within your words and with your continued excellence--Very well done & Best of luck in the contest!


  • sunshinegirl silver member
    July 10

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    How do you do it! This is positively beyond words! Really didn't need the picture, your words spoke loud and clear! Great job on this one!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta